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Essay
I had the most fun with the RIP project. Even though at times the process was tedious, I really enjoyed completing this assignment. This is because I like creating graphic designs and aesthetically organizing information. In addition to this, I expanded my knowledge when researching for my topic. My journal addresses issues that make an impact on the lives of young girls today. These issues are romantic relationships, body image, and gender roles. While researching I learned so much of how reading fairy tales and watching Disney movies can affect a child's view of the world.
After turning the RIP in, my instructor proofread it. I received the comment depicted below.
After turning the RIP in, my instructor proofread it. I received the comment depicted below.
Even though, I was told I did not have to make revisions, I still did. I knew I could make my project stronger so I reread my project and essay and changed certain sentences and words to make it more powerful.